Analysis

The article I chose that used data was the article from the New York Times about the far-right nationalist protests in Poland. There was a lot of data, from 60,000 protestors to police dispatched and counter-protestors. There is a lot to consume when it comes to an article like this, and one thing that I've noticed is that the reporter generally tries to space out all this data. It can become overwhelming when in one or two sentences, you are inundated with a lot to keep track of. If there's anything that I've learned in 3101, it's "keep it simple, stupid." In general, don't flood your sentences with too much. In order to keep your reader, you need to have your information displayed in a comprehensive, and not overwhelming, style.

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